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A bounty hunter arriving from an alternate reality holds bar patrons hostage in order to trap a fugitive killer but soon discovers one of the hostages may be more dangerous than the expected fugitive.
Hi CraigD,dpg The killer is on the run from the alternate universe and is on a mission to merge with his prime universe self because the two of them cannot exist in the same universe - it's a paradox. The doppelganger is one of the hostages. So, on the basis of something to care about: "A bounty hunRead more
Hi CraigD,dpg
The killer is on the run from the alternate universe and is on a mission to merge with his prime universe self because the two of them cannot exist in the same universe – it’s a paradox. The doppelganger is one of the hostages.
So, on the basis of something to care about:
See less“A bounty hunter from an alternate universe fights to stop a killer able to manipulate time and reality from taking over the body and identity of an innocent man”.
A bounty hunter arriving from an alternate reality holds bar patrons hostage in order to trap a fugitive killer but soon discovers one of the hostages may be more dangerous than the expected fugitive.
Hi CraigD,dpg The killer is on the run from the alternate universe and is on a mission to merge with his prime universe self because the two of them cannot exist in the same universe - it's a paradox. The doppelganger is one of the hostages. So, on the basis of something to care about: "A bounty hunRead more
Hi CraigD,dpg
The killer is on the run from the alternate universe and is on a mission to merge with his prime universe self because the two of them cannot exist in the same universe – it’s a paradox. The doppelganger is one of the hostages.
So, on the basis of something to care about:
See less“A bounty hunter from an alternate universe fights to stop a killer able to manipulate time and reality from taking over the body and identity of an innocent man”.
A bounty hunter arriving from an alternate reality holds bar patrons hostage in order to trap a fugitive killer but soon discovers one of the hostages may be more dangerous than the expected fugitive.
True. I think it's difficult when commenting on a logline to separate the feeling of natural curiosity about a story or concept and wanting to know more - on the one hand - and thinking that the logline offers insufficient detail. That's not to say I disagree with dpg's comments about the logline onRead more
True.
I think it’s difficult when commenting on a logline to separate the feeling of natural curiosity about a story or concept and wanting to know more – on the one hand – and thinking that the logline offers insufficient detail.
That’s not to say I disagree with dpg’s comments about the logline only addresssing the setup. He’s right. The problem with continually re-writing a logline is being blinded to the forest by the trees. And then with each additional comment – often about story or concept – the detail increases until the logline becomes cluttered and ineffective.
My personal approach when commenting on other writer’s efforts is to attempt to rewrite the logline – with added sizzle (dpg’s word) – on the basis of the original logline without seeking additional info. Is this more useful than seeking additional info? Maybe we could discuss it.
See less“A bounty hunter arriving from an alternate reality holds bar patrons hostage in order to trap a fugitive but when a killer able to manipulate time and reality shows up, the hunter becomes the hunted”.