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  1. Posted: January 13, 2015In: Public

    A bounty hunter arriving from an alternate reality holds bar patrons hostage in order to trap a fugitive killer but soon discovers one of the hostages may be more dangerous than the expected fugitive.

    kbfilmworks Samurai
    Added an answer on January 14, 2015 at 4:13 am

    dpg, I'm not sure I follow your train of thought. I've just tried to do what CraigD suggested and brought the victim into the logline as 'something to care about'. Maybe it wasn't clear in previous iterations that the prime universe double is just an innocent average Joe - what you describe as the sRead more

    dpg, I’m not sure I follow your train of thought. I’ve just tried to do what CraigD suggested and brought the victim into the logline as ‘something to care about’. Maybe it wasn’t clear in previous iterations that the prime universe double is just an innocent average Joe – what you describe as the stakes character.

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  2. Posted: January 13, 2015In: Public

    A bounty hunter arriving from an alternate reality holds bar patrons hostage in order to trap a fugitive killer but soon discovers one of the hostages may be more dangerous than the expected fugitive.

    kbfilmworks Samurai
    Added an answer on January 13, 2015 at 9:40 pm

    "A bounty hunter fights to save an innocent man from losing his body and identity to his doppelganger, a killer from an alternate universe able to manipulate time and reality".

    “A bounty hunter fights to save an innocent man from losing his body and identity to his doppelganger, a killer from an alternate universe able to manipulate time and reality”.

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  3. Posted: January 13, 2015In: Public

    A bounty hunter arriving from an alternate reality holds bar patrons hostage in order to trap a fugitive killer but soon discovers one of the hostages may be more dangerous than the expected fugitive.

    kbfilmworks Samurai
    Added an answer on January 13, 2015 at 9:40 pm

    "A bounty hunter fights to save an innocent man from losing his body and identity to his doppelganger, a killer from an alternate universe able to manipulate time and reality".

    “A bounty hunter fights to save an innocent man from losing his body and identity to his doppelganger, a killer from an alternate universe able to manipulate time and reality”.

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