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An idealistic detective must protect a witness from the corrupt cops of an outpost town after his witness kills a cop in self defence.
This sounds a little like something we would have seen before - 16 Blocks, Attack On Precinct 13 etc. What does it have that makes it stand higher than these lot? The story is in there but feels a bit generic. Is the witness a woman? Could she be the lover of someone? Why did she have to protect herRead more
This sounds a little like something we would have seen before – 16 Blocks, Attack On Precinct 13 etc. What does it have that makes it stand higher than these lot? The story is in there but feels a bit generic.
Is the witness a woman? Could she be the lover of someone? Why did she have to protect herself?
See lessWhen a Demon kidnaps his fiance, a timid janitor must uncover his past and locate a mythical artifact that encases the power of a god.
It certainly gives us more in terms of drawing us into the story. Does he have to locate the artifact because the demon can't? Is it the demon that wants this artifact? I'm a little confused as to what the artifact will have to do with everything so think you need to add that in, like if the demon fRead more
It certainly gives us more in terms of drawing us into the story. Does he have to locate the artifact because the demon can’t? Is it the demon that wants this artifact? I’m a little confused as to what the artifact will have to do with everything so think you need to add that in, like if the demon fails to get the artifact will he kill the fiancee?
See lessWhen a grieving medic with deadly powers resists induction into the horsemen of the apocalypse, she must battle the remaining three in order to save the world.
Much clearer in terms of goal, antagonist, protagonist, and stakes. Also feels like a completely different movie from the log line you first wrote. This one is so much better and although it never tells us how she got her powers I still think it works as it will hook people in to understand what herRead more
Much clearer in terms of goal, antagonist, protagonist, and stakes. Also feels like a completely different movie from the log line you first wrote. This one is so much better and although it never tells us how she got her powers I still think it works as it will hook people in to understand what her powers are.
It is a good log line and I’m struggling to find any other feedback for it as I think it works. It invites questions but if it told me everything I wouldn’t want to see it. Well done.
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