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A pig farmers daughter trapped on an island must protect her newborn baby from a bloodthirsty pig born with human hands.
Ok...this is rather unusual! Definitely stands out but sounds like a B movie, if that is what you are going for I don't know? I would perhaps change it to 'When a pig farmer's daughter becomes trapped.....' Other than that I think the log line works although I'm not sure if it would be something I'dRead more
Ok…this is rather unusual! Definitely stands out but sounds like a B movie, if that is what you are going for I don’t know?
I would perhaps change it to ‘When a pig farmer’s daughter becomes trapped…..’
Other than that I think the log line works although I’m not sure if it would be something I’d want to see!!
See lessWhen a prude housewife's perfect son goes missing, his secret life as a gigolo is revealed and the mother decides to pose as a prostitute in order to infiltrate the underground world and find out what happened to her son.
This tells us the story but is rather 'clunky' in the sense that it seems to feel like it goes 'and then...and then...' I think the start is fine but needs altering as it goes down. When a prude housewife's son goes missing she uncovers his secret life as a gigolo causing her to infiltrate his darkRead more
This tells us the story but is rather ‘clunky’ in the sense that it seems to feel like it goes ‘and then…and then…’ I think the start is fine but needs altering as it goes down.
When a prude housewife’s son goes missing she uncovers his secret life as a gigolo causing her to infiltrate his dark life to uncover the mystery by posing as a prostitute.
This would be my first attempt at it which says the same thing but in less words. Still think my version can be tightened but this is the information to get across I think.
See lessAfter being accused of murder, a na?ve secret agent searches for answers, only to find herself completely unequipped for life outside her sheltered little world.
I like it thus far, and the title really stands out, but we need to know why she is unequipped for the outside world and what are the potential problems she will face. The set up works fine but need to know a better obstacle and what she must do to overcome it.
I like it thus far, and the title really stands out, but we need to know why she is unequipped for the outside world and what are the potential problems she will face. The set up works fine but need to know a better obstacle and what she must do to overcome it.
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