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  1. Posted: October 16, 2017In: Action

    Denied life insurance benefits after her partner dies, an unemployed chef must unravel a diabolical link between the insurance company, a genetic testing company, and a popular internet search engine before she and her unborn child become their next victims.

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    Added an answer on October 17, 2017 at 8:36 am

    Okay, so this doesn't read as good as it could, and there's a lot of elements being juggled, but... I'll admit I came here to read everyone's comments because the story intrigued me. Seems like a facinating story. Good luck with it.

    Okay, so this doesn’t read as good as it could, and there’s a lot of elements being juggled, but…

    I’ll admit I came here to read everyone’s comments because the story intrigued me. Seems like a facinating story. Good luck with it.

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  2. Posted: October 16, 2017In: Drama

    When two inmates realise that no one is on their side, together they must navigate an uneasy friendship to set each other free.

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    Added an answer on October 17, 2017 at 8:28 am

    I feel that this is generally too vague. Who is not on their side? What does this even mean? Why is their friendship uneasy? What is at stake? There's also a good opportunity missed here to show what it the quirk, or uniqueness to this story that sets it apart from every other jail-break piece. I woRead more

    I feel that this is generally too vague. Who is not on their side? What does this even mean? Why is their friendship uneasy? What is at stake?

    There’s also a good opportunity missed here to show what it the quirk, or uniqueness to this story that sets it apart from every other jail-break piece.
    I wonder, what is the really special part of this story that I’ve never seen before that will make me want to particularly read this story?

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  3. Posted: July 13, 2017In: Drama

    When an anxious recluse agrees to take his cancer-fighting friend on one last adventure, he doesn?t bank on having his beliefs, loyalties and survival skills challenged when she falls fatally ill.

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    Added an answer on July 18, 2017 at 9:35 am

    When invited by a terminal cancer patient, an anxious online recluse dared to join her on a road trip, but when she falls fatally ill he is left responsible for getting her home. Maybe slightly better?

    When invited by a terminal cancer patient, an anxious online recluse dared to join her on a road trip, but when she falls fatally ill he is left responsible for getting her home.

    Maybe slightly better?

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