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A young writer with an addiction to drugs attempts to write his masterpiece on a serial killer. Hopeless, he finds himself in a world of bizarre delusion and questions his reality.
My poor attempt: While researching material for his book about a serial killer, a disaffected writer spirals deeper into his drug addiction until delusional fantasy blurs with reality. I'm picturing an American Psycho-type character study. Could be intriguing... Good luck with it, Monique
My poor attempt:
While researching material for his book about a serial killer, a disaffected writer spirals deeper into his drug addiction until delusional fantasy blurs with reality.
I’m picturing an American Psycho-type character study. Could be intriguing…
Good luck with it,
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A smart, new classy version of an old west historical tale that has never been told, between a well-dressed clean man of small stature and his dirty giant brutal enemy with a personal vendetta;of which takes place in a large alluring and immaculately clean gambling hall and infamous brothel, where heaven and hell plays about.
Callenhall, what are the elements of your logline? Protag = David-type character, but who is he? (Is he a lawman, banker, husband, what?) Antag = Goliath-type character, but again, who is he? (Is he gang leader, murderer, what? Goal = ? Stakes = ? Hook = ? Once you can answer those questions, you'llRead more
Callenhall, what are the elements of your logline?
Protag = David-type character, but who is he? (Is he a lawman, banker, husband, what?)
Antag = Goliath-type character, but again, who is he? (Is he gang leader, murderer, what?
Goal = ?
Stakes = ?
Hook = ?
Once you can answer those questions, you’ll find that you can start gleaning the real logline from your story.
See lessWhile a FATHER searches for his missing teen son, his friend, Frank house sits, unknowingly unaware someone else is there with him.
Agree with quikoni - whose story is this? It reads like 2 disparate stories so if there's a connection between the father searching for his teen son and Frank housesitting, I think you have to include that in the logline. Is the missing son the one in the house with Frank? Sounds like there may be aRead more
Agree with quikoni – whose story is this? It reads like 2 disparate stories so if there’s a connection between the father searching for his teen son and Frank housesitting, I think you have to include that in the logline. Is the missing son the one in the house with Frank? Sounds like there may be a thriller/horror element – that needs to make it into the logline also. You don’t have to include the twist but being coy isn’t doing your logline any favors.
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