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  1. Posted: October 5, 2017In: Student Loglines

    A reaper is going to take an old man life,but the old man want to finish his life checklist before the reaper get him.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on October 5, 2017 at 11:05 am

    This logline falls in line with your others, therefore, I suggest you read the comments made on your other posts and apply them to this one. One point to consider here is the lack of clarity about the protagonist - the Grim Reaper or the old man? Once you decide who the main character is, like withRead more

    This logline falls in line with your others, therefore, I suggest you read the comments made on your other posts and apply them to this one.

    One point to consider here is the lack of clarity about the protagonist – the Grim Reaper or the old man? Once you decide who the main character is, like with the other loglines, give him a reason to need to achieve a specific goal.

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  2. Posted: October 5, 2017In: SciFi

    An Alien had been adopt by a village of savage,but the savage don’t know it’s an alien so they treat it like an animal,few year later the alien start to find who he is and where he come from.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on October 5, 2017 at 10:58 am

    Again, please read the comments made on your other posts as they all apply here as well. Why is the alien in the village? What does he or she want? And why does he or she want it?

    Again, please read the comments made on your other posts as they all apply here as well.

    Why is the alien in the village? What does he or she want? And why does he or she want it?

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  3. Posted: October 5, 2017In: Action

    A family need to prepare every resources in town as fast as they can before the nuclear boom hit their country in 3 min.

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    Added an answer on October 5, 2017 at 10:56 am

    Yuen497, Little can be said about this concept that hasn't been said about your others already. However, is this a 3 min short film? If so, it could work as a gimmick based sketch. I would suggest you change it to a black comedy and specify one of the family memebrs as the main character.

    Yuen497,

    Little can be said about this concept that hasn’t been said about your others already.

    However, is this a 3 min short film?
    If so, it could work as a gimmick based sketch. I would suggest you change it to a black comedy and specify one of the family memebrs as the main character.

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