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An intelligent but unsuccessful father must save his kids from terrorist who think that he is a Superhero.
What Richiev said. More details would help understand the plot and genre.
What Richiev said.
More details would help understand the plot and genre.
See lessOn Loglines: There are certain answers to logline problems that many of us seem to repeat as we give advice.
Agreed with all the above. Little addition I think worth mentioning is diagnostic practices. If someone posts the same concept many times and each logline iteration, however great or small, receives similar comments?there is a problem with the story. It likely comes down to one of two main problems:Read more
Agreed with all the above.
Little addition I think worth mentioning is diagnostic practices.
If someone posts the same concept many times and each logline iteration, however great or small, receives similar comments?there is a problem with the story. It likely comes down to one of two main problems:
1) Fundamental issues in the concept.
2) The poster is ignoring the comments given by the members.
Either way the poster is not abel or willing to understand how to improve the logline or concept.
See lessA struggling poet returns home to care for his terminally ill sister but conflicts arise again with his overbearing and domineering mother.
What DPG said. Also it would help you in future to think of characters in terms of motivation and action, good characters MUST achieve something for a reason - they are their pursuit of their goals. In the context of this post, what was the event that made him have to take care of the sister now? ThRead more
What DPG said.
Also it would help you in future to think of characters in terms of motivation and action, good characters MUST achieve something for a reason – they are their pursuit of their goals.
In the context of this post, what was the event that made him have to take care of the sister now? This event, or inciting incident, should be mentioned at the start of the logline.
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