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To salvage her disgraced career, an L.A. Chef goes to work for a Kdrama star whose temper is as challenging as the cuisine.
Specifying that character as a Korean Soap star would help clear up the confusion with the original lolgline description. However that is a small problem compared to the much larger one of the plot being mostly absent.
Specifying that character as a Korean Soap star would help clear up the confusion with the original lolgline description.
See lessHowever that is a small problem compared to the much larger one of the plot being mostly absent.
A racially maligned orphan prone to violence is unwillingly thrust into politics and must fight for those who have vilified her to avoid civil war as well as protect her friends
As this is for a novel not the screen I think the most useful feedback I can give relates to the plot alone. I think the connection between the potential civil war and her being pushed into politics needs explaining. Also protecting her friends in my mind pales in comparison to preventing civil warRead more
As this is for a novel not the screen I think the most useful feedback I can give relates to the plot alone.
I think the connection between the potential civil war and her being pushed into politics needs explaining. Also protecting her friends in my mind pales in comparison to preventing civil war as a lesser secondary goal it doesn’t need mentioning at such an early stage.
Hope this helps.
See lessTo salvage her disgraced career, an L.A. Chef goes to work for a Kdrama star whose temper is as challenging as the cuisine.
What is Kdarma? I just googled and found out it means Korean Drama but best not to make a logline reader need to google to understand the basic premise of a story. Perhaps best to re define the star as a temperamental soap star or just temperamental star, that alone conjures up the Norma Desmond eskRead more
What is Kdarma?
I just googled and found out it means Korean Drama but best not to make a logline reader need to google to understand the basic premise of a story.
Perhaps best to re define the star as a temperamental soap star or just temperamental star, that alone conjures up the Norma Desmond esk characteristics.
Other wise it sounds like the inciting incident is getting the job with the star and as DPG mentions above there is no plot described passed this point. I think this is similar to The Devil Wears Prada in character dynamic. Perhaps look into de constructing that story for ideas on how to structure a plot.
Maybe the chef needs to prove to a restaurant owner that she can work for the star for at least 12 months in order to prove herself and earn a position in his 3 Michelin hat establishment.
Hope this helps.
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