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When a rookie DA?s carrier is almost derailed he redeems himself when, through an old journal, he emerges into an alternate timeline and receives much needed advice from a legendary prosecutor nicknamed The Gasser
Good point DPG I didn't realise it was for a TV show.
Good point DPG I didn’t realise it was for a TV show.
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From what you've written here so far I don't see the justification for mentioning the names Romeo and Juliet. Reason is, that combo of names resonates with such particular story lines and characters that unless you do a Bazz Luhrmann style modern re telling and stay true to original dialogue and chaRead more
From what you’ve written here so far I don’t see the justification for mentioning the names Romeo and Juliet. Reason is, that combo of names resonates with such particular story lines and characters that unless you do a Bazz Luhrmann style modern re telling and stay true to original dialogue and character dynamic you are miss leading the reader and audience.
The only other way I can see this done credibly is ala Pride and Prejudice and Zombies parody the original with a cross over genre.
Note that in Oh Brother Where Art Thou the only element retained from the Odyssey is the most of the structure and mentors as it was loosely based on not a modern re telling they didn’t call it The Odyssey.
What is it that happens to these lovers in this Zombie story that is different to others and makes it unique? What is the primary inciting incident for the MC that makes her need to achieve her goal?
See lessWhen a rookie DA?s carrier is almost derailed he redeems himself when, through an old journal, he emerges into an alternate timeline and receives much needed advice from a legendary prosecutor nicknamed The Gasser
This logline essentially describes the first half of act one of a movie, but doesn't describe what happens after that point. If the main character is the rookie DA and his inciting incident is entering the alternate time line, what is the MC goal? What is the "...much needed advice..."? What are hisRead more
This logline essentially describes the first half of act one of a movie, but doesn’t describe what happens after that point.
If the main character is the rookie DA and his inciting incident is entering the alternate time line, what is the MC goal? What is the “…much needed advice…”? What are his obstacles? Who is the bad guy or gal? What are the stakes?
Here is a suggestion for the start of a redraft:
After a rookie DA enters an alternate time line he finds out who killed the victim in the case of the century and must…
Hope this helps.
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