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When a music teacher discovers his new girlfriend is a serial killer, he must decide whether to turn her in or continue having amazing sex.
As love stories go the best have a force of opposition to the love trying to keep them apart. Other wise the "horny" dilemma aside it is a simple case of they love each other and that is it without conflict it becomes a boring account of two people getting together. Once he decides what he wants toRead more
As love stories go the best have a force of opposition to the love trying to keep them apart. Other wise the “horny” dilemma aside it is a simple case of they love each other and that is it without conflict it becomes a boring account of two people getting together.
Once he decides what he wants to do i.e stay with the girl he needs to fight the force of opposition to the love in this case the law comes in handy. He could fight the police to protect their relationship as she keeps killing.
But all this needs to be clear from the logline not just the nature of his initial decision and their relationship.
This has the making of a good black comedy but I strongly recommend adding in a point of conflict not just dilemma.
See lessWhen a music teacher discovers his new girlfriend is a serial killer, he must decide whether to turn her in or continue having amazing sex.
If his goal is to stop her then then the event that incites this should be him confirming beyond a doubt that she is a killer. Which makes him whitening her kill the most powerful version of this event. The suspense in the rest of the story can come from his actions and the stakes involved with gettRead more
If his goal is to stop her then then the event that incites this should be him confirming beyond a doubt that she is a killer. Which makes him whitening her kill the most powerful version of this event.
The suspense in the rest of the story can come from his actions and the stakes involved with getting caught by the police before he manages to stop her or getting killed himself.
If you want to play on dramatic irony best to hide details from the other characters in the story not the main character as the audience will need to follow him. Seeing as you position the MC as the main dramatic point of view character in the story.
See lessWhen her ex-husband and the love of her life is killed by a vicious drug-manufacturing motorcycle gang, a letter-of-the-law undercover cop infiltrates the gang but must battle addiction and her moral code especially when her estranged 10 year old daughter is kidnapped by the gang.
Great, so if the ex being killed is the inciting incident better to call him the love of her life as this is in fact what drives her not the fact that he is her ex. Now what would be a good goal for her to pursue as a result of the killing that will resolve her problem?
Great, so if the ex being killed is the inciting incident better to call him the love of her life as this is in fact what drives her not the fact that he is her ex.
Now what would be a good goal for her to pursue as a result of the killing that will resolve her problem?
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