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  1. Posted: May 18, 2015In: Public

    After a big CEO threatens to convert their inherited community TV station into a home shopping channel. Two brothers must find the worst talent to produce the worst shows in order to make the CEO lose interest and give them back their station to uphold their dying father's wish.

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    Added an answer on May 19, 2015 at 1:08 pm

    The big bad CEO purchased a majority of shares in the company after the brothers inherited it in an aggressive take over as suggested above by Rutger. Do you find the details of the take over relevant to the plot? We structured the story to start (Inciting incident) after the threat to convert the sRead more

    The big bad CEO purchased a majority of shares in the company after the brothers inherited it in an aggressive take over as suggested above by Rutger.

    Do you find the details of the take over relevant to the plot?

    We structured the story to start (Inciting incident) after the threat to convert the station into a home shopping channel not the take over. The brothers goal is to uphold their dying fathers wish by preventing the conversion to the shopping channel which will prevent the elderly viewers and their pension monies from being exploited.

    Thanks for your help.

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    When Santa Claus wants to quit work after Saint Nicholas kidnaps his inner child, Santa?s abandend- homeless nine year old daughter must team up with the soulless president of a big European toy company to save the spirit of Christmas.

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    Added an answer on May 19, 2015 at 1:00 pm

    I read those posts but it still seamed cryptic as I think the elements in a logline should require no prior explanations. If a large portion of the readers are likely to not understand the story as a result of the elements being dependent on prior specific knowledge then likely the logline won't achRead more

    I read those posts but it still seamed cryptic as I think the elements in a logline should require no prior explanations.

    If a large portion of the readers are likely to not understand the story as a result of the elements being dependent on prior specific knowledge then likely the logline won’t achieve its intended goals.

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  3. Posted: May 18, 2015In: Public

    After a big CEO threatens to convert their inherited community TV station into a home shopping channel. Two brothers must find the worst talent to produce the worst shows in order to make the CEO lose interest and give them back their station to uphold their dying father's wish.

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    Added an answer on May 18, 2015 at 1:22 pm

    This is the logline for the ongoing premise of a comedy web series. Thanks for your help.

    This is the logline for the ongoing premise of a comedy web series.

    Thanks for your help.

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