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A mysterious boy is on the run after having his identity found out, will he escape from the evil prospect of the hunters chasing him every second.
Good points raise above. I would add also that in this instance the antagonist description is of particular importance. The boy running away is a relatively mundane action that most boys will be able to do (if not have done at some point during child hood). There for the force he is running from neeRead more
Good points raise above.
I would add also that in this instance the antagonist description is of particular importance. The boy running away is a relatively mundane action that most boys will be able to do (if not have done at some point during child hood). There for the force he is running from needs to be specifically designed to increase the obstacles he is up against. A generic hunter is not scary or specific enough but: an OCD serial killer could be for example, just a crazy suggestion to illustrate what I mean.
Hoe this helps.
See lessAfter a man has been found guilty for murder and put on death row, his friend attempts to uncover who’s set him up before time runs out.
If the MC is in fact the friend then give him a much stronger connection to the man on death row. Could he be his brother, twin brother, only matching kidney downer, lover, etc... The stronger the connection with the man dying the higher the stakes and more compelling a story. Good basic premise thoRead more
If the MC is in fact the friend then give him a much stronger connection to the man on death row. Could he be his brother, twin brother, only matching kidney downer, lover, etc…
The stronger the connection with the man dying the higher the stakes and more compelling a story. Good basic premise though it just needs clarification on who the story is about and the stakes at hand.
Hope this helps.
See lessAfter a man has been found guilty for murder and put on death row, his friend attempts to uncover who’s set him up before time runs out.
If the MC is in fact the friend then give him a much stronger connection to the man on death row. Could he be his brother, twin brother, only matching kidney downer, lover, etc... The stronger the connection with the man dying the higher the stakes and more compelling a story. Good basic premise thoRead more
If the MC is in fact the friend then give him a much stronger connection to the man on death row. Could he be his brother, twin brother, only matching kidney downer, lover, etc…
The stronger the connection with the man dying the higher the stakes and more compelling a story. Good basic premise though it just needs clarification on who the story is about and the stakes at hand.
Hope this helps.
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