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  1. Posted: September 29, 2014In: Public

    When a narcissistic doctor begins to get stalked by a revengeful, criminal and psychotic patient who is dying because of a medical mistake she made when treating his disease, she must protect herself and her family.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on September 29, 2014 at 9:39 am

    Very good points raised above about the structure and economy of the logline. It reads similar to cape fear only with a doctor instead of a lawyer and a sick patient instead of a former convict. Whilst the antagonist has a ticking time bomb of their own which is rare and a great motivator. They seemRead more

    Very good points raised above about the structure and economy of the logline. It reads similar to cape fear only with a doctor instead of a lawyer and a sick patient instead of a former convict.

    Whilst the antagonist has a ticking time bomb of their own which is rare and a great motivator. They seem potentially week as a result of their medical condition as long as the doctor and family can keep escaping long enough the patient will die before harming them.
    Perhaps an escaped mental patient and psychiatrist would be a better choice to give the same stakes as Cape Fear.

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  2. Posted: September 29, 2014In: Public

    When a narcissistic doctor begins to get stalked by a revengeful, criminal and psychotic patient who is dying because of a medical mistake she made when treating his disease, she must protect herself and her family.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on September 29, 2014 at 9:39 am

    Very good points raised above about the structure and economy of the logline. It reads similar to cape fear only with a doctor instead of a lawyer and a sick patient instead of a former convict. Whilst the antagonist has a ticking time bomb of their own which is rare and a great motivator. They seemRead more

    Very good points raised above about the structure and economy of the logline. It reads similar to cape fear only with a doctor instead of a lawyer and a sick patient instead of a former convict.

    Whilst the antagonist has a ticking time bomb of their own which is rare and a great motivator. They seem potentially week as a result of their medical condition as long as the doctor and family can keep escaping long enough the patient will die before harming them.
    Perhaps an escaped mental patient and psychiatrist would be a better choice to give the same stakes as Cape Fear.

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  3. Posted: September 27, 2014In: Public

    When a hooker attempts to steal a wallet from a drunken john, she accidentally makes a horrific discovery — the couple is not alone in a shabby room of a love hotel.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on September 29, 2014 at 9:32 am

    My bad, thanks for that DPG. I would like to strike my previous comment about this from the record, other comments still stand.

    My bad, thanks for that DPG.

    I would like to strike my previous comment about this from the record, other comments still stand.

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