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After literally dying onstage, a caustic comedian's only shot at getting into Heaven is to fix three lives ruined because of him.
Sharp and to the point well written logline indeed but it feels a bit too academic by that I mean it lacks the emotional motivation that the ghost genre normally has. For example the love for his partner in 'Ghost' or the love interest in 'Just Like Heaven'. The emotional motivation often helps creaRead more
Sharp and to the point well written logline indeed but it feels a bit too academic by that I mean it lacks the emotional motivation that the ghost genre normally has. For example the love for his partner in ‘Ghost’ or the love interest in ‘Just Like Heaven’.
The emotional motivation often helps create and sustain the internal journey for the MC to learn how to become better individuals dead or alive.
I assume this is a comedy and as such gives the freedom to stretch the plausibility aspect. Perhaps then add in an ally or love interest to help the MC change and go on an internal journey as they achieve their external goal.
Hope this helps Nir.
See lessAfter literally dying onstage, a caustic comedian's only shot at getting into Heaven is to fix three lives ruined because of him.
Sharp and to the point well written logline indeed but it feels a bit too academic by that I mean it lacks the emotional motivation that the ghost genre normally has. For example the love for his partner in 'Ghost' or the love interest in 'Just Like Heaven'. The emotional motivation often helps creaRead more
Sharp and to the point well written logline indeed but it feels a bit too academic by that I mean it lacks the emotional motivation that the ghost genre normally has. For example the love for his partner in ‘Ghost’ or the love interest in ‘Just Like Heaven’.
The emotional motivation often helps create and sustain the internal journey for the MC to learn how to become better individuals dead or alive.
I assume this is a comedy and as such gives the freedom to stretch the plausibility aspect. Perhaps then add in an ally or love interest to help the MC change and go on an internal journey as they achieve their external goal.
Hope this helps Nir.
See lessAfter their father dies poor, two disparate brothers move to Colorado to seek their fortunes during the Silver Mine boom in the 1800's and struggle to stay one step ahead of an opportunistic politician.
Good to consider the need for a dual protagonist plot in your story when structuring it, if anything, for the perils that a dual protagonist structure presents. One internal journey combined with one external goal is complicated and difficult enough as it is. So 2 separate yet similar internal journRead more
Good to consider the need for a dual protagonist plot in your story when structuring it, if anything, for the perils that a dual protagonist structure presents.
One internal journey combined with one external goal is complicated and difficult enough as it is. So 2 separate yet similar internal journeys that work together towards achieving the same external goal is even more difficult to do.
I solute you Tara for your bravery in tackling such a plot and look forward to your next draft of this logline as it sounds like a very interesting idea.
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