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After their father dies poor, two disparate brothers move to Colorado to seek their fortunes during the Silver Mine boom in the 1800's and struggle to stay one step ahead of an opportunistic politician.
Good to consider the need for a dual protagonist plot in your story when structuring it, if anything, for the perils that a dual protagonist structure presents. One internal journey combined with one external goal is complicated and difficult enough as it is. So 2 separate yet similar internal journRead more
Good to consider the need for a dual protagonist plot in your story when structuring it, if anything, for the perils that a dual protagonist structure presents.
One internal journey combined with one external goal is complicated and difficult enough as it is. So 2 separate yet similar internal journeys that work together towards achieving the same external goal is even more difficult to do.
I solute you Tara for your bravery in tackling such a plot and look forward to your next draft of this logline as it sounds like a very interesting idea.
See lessA young amnesiac and terribly clumsy woman must rely on the help of a strange psychologist to remember that she is a super heroine who holds the key to stop a mad scientist who's about to attempt a quantum experiment that could destroy humanity.
I would add that the point at which the story starts is very important for a series so try adding an inciting incident as well.
I would add that the point at which the story starts is very important for a series so try adding an inciting incident as well.
See lessA young amnesiac and terribly clumsy woman must rely on the help of a strange psychologist to remember that she is a super heroine who holds the key to stop a mad scientist who's about to attempt a quantum experiment that could destroy humanity.
I would add that the point at which the story starts is very important for a series so try adding an inciting incident as well.
I would add that the point at which the story starts is very important for a series so try adding an inciting incident as well.
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