1. Posted: June 1, 2012In:

    Dirty Filthy Supermodel. When an untidy grumpy dustbin man is knocked down by a truck, he meets a fashion conscience God at the perly gates. He's given one month to get his face on a fashion magazine to gain entry to heaven or face expulsion to hell.

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    Or Humanun ex machine? Depends on the story of course.

    Or Humanun ex machine? Depends on the story of course.

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  2. Posted: June 1, 2012In:

    Dirty Filthy Supermodel. When an untidy grumpy dustbin man is knocked down by a truck, he meets a fashion conscience God at the perly gates. He's given one month to get his face on a fashion magazine to gain entry to heaven or face expulsion to hell.

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    Intentionally or not this is the first story I have heard of in which man could teach god a lesson. Could god be made into the MC then run the risk of: Deus ex humanun?

    Intentionally or not this is the first story I have heard of in which man could teach god a lesson. Could god be made into the MC then run the risk of: Deus ex humanun?

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  3. Posted: May 31, 2012In:

    After the head of a giant corporation discovers a malicious conspiracy, he works by night to bring down the very company he leads by day

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    Hi Vinay. This reads even better but if I may I think your holding back on the stakes and specifics in the logline, perhaps: "When a CEO discovers the directors of his multinational bank are conspiring to bring down the economy of the US he operates by night to destroy the very institution he leadsRead more

    Hi Vinay.
    This reads even better but if I may I think your holding back on the stakes and specifics in the logline, perhaps:

    “When a CEO discovers the directors of his multinational bank are conspiring to bring down the economy of the US he operates by night to destroy the very institution he leads by day.”

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