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Ed Noble?s world falls apart when a suicide bomber murders his family. Holding the bomber?s spiritual leader responsible, Ed resorts to desperate measures to bring him to account.
Hi Tim My pleasure glad to share thoughts. Understood but it sounds more like your thinking in terms of controlling idea than a logline so my previous comments still apply. In regards to your last post on the antagonist in your story I think that extremism is too vague an antagonist. You may need toRead more
Hi Tim
My pleasure glad to share thoughts.
Understood but it sounds more like your thinking in terms of controlling idea than a logline so my previous comments still apply.
See lessIn regards to your last post on the antagonist in your story I think that extremism is too vague an antagonist. You may need to specify, through their actions, a person or organization as the antagonist rather than a tendency.
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A drug addict and a businessman come together through their joint love of music, and become increasingly dependant on each other.
Could be characters for a sweet story well done on a low budget but needs a clear journey for the dual protagonists. What are they trying to achieve and to what end? I have seen many a film made on the premise of "character study" but this often doesn't hold enough interest for the audience to securRead more
Could be characters for a sweet story well done on a low budget but needs a clear journey for the dual protagonists. What are they trying to achieve and to what end?
I have seen many a film made on the premise of “character study” but this often doesn’t hold enough interest for the audience to secure a release. Good idea at the very least to clarify what they want in the logline, give them a goal, as this will explain to the reader what it is the audience will see the MCs achieve at the end.
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I think you may have mixed around the logline and content grab text boxes. From the content grab it sounds like he is an anti hero MC first big hurdle for empathy there. A few questions to help clear up the logline: What is the main action? What is the POV of the story? - His digging the tunnel? OrRead more
I think you may have mixed around the logline and content grab text boxes.
From the content grab it sounds like he is an anti hero MC first big hurdle for empathy there.
See lessA few questions to help clear up the logline:
What is the main action?
What is the POV of the story? – His digging the tunnel? Or his getting a companion? Or his avoiding persecution for the disappearance of his wife?