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After the death of his father, a young boy finds comfort in stories of the "wild west" while living in New York City, 1938.
This hints at an interesting story but the logline is incomplete. What is the challenge that the boy faces? i.e. what does he want? what's stopping him from getting it? and what will happen if he doesn't get it?
This hints at an interesting story but the logline is incomplete. What is the challenge that the boy faces? i.e. what does he want? what’s stopping him from getting it? and what will happen if he doesn’t get it?
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I agree- the inciting incident, the goal, the antagonist and the stakes. Essential ingredients. If it is high concept enough to grab us you don't need to describe the inner journey with reference to flaws in the hero and bad guy.
I agree- the inciting incident, the goal, the antagonist and the stakes. Essential ingredients. If it is high concept enough to grab us you don’t need to describe the inner journey with reference to flaws in the hero and bad guy.
See lessIt was love at first sight for two outgoing romantics. Years later, a chance encounter while on family vacations forces the unrequited soul mates to face the same decision: Continue their comfortable but unfulfilling lives or risk everything for a chance at complete happiness?
First note- when you do a revision of your logline, you should post it as a 'reply' to your original logline rather than posting multiple new versions of it. Just fyi. Second- Your logline reminded me of a descrption I read. Have a look at this film and the other two in the 'Before' trilogy with EthRead more
First note- when you do a revision of your logline, you should post it as a ‘reply’ to your original logline rather than posting multiple new versions of it. Just fyi.
Second- Your logline reminded me of a descrption I read. Have a look at this film and the other two in the ‘Before’ trilogy with Ethan Hawke. I think one or all three of them may be very similar to yours but I haven’t seen them so I can’t say for sure. Again, just fyi. Good to check out what is out there already 🙂
http://sff.org.au/public/films/type/feature/before-midnight/
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