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  1. Posted: March 21, 2020In: Romance

    A married woman accidentally drinks a love potion and falls in love with a shy prince. Her open-hearted husband is excited for her, but the King isn’t.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on March 21, 2020 at 2:41 pm

    One more thing, Story is conflict, without conflict, there is no story.?You say her husband is excited for the lead character... if there is no conflict between the husband and the lead character, what is his purpose in moving the story forward?If the Husband is okay with the situation, why not haveRead more

    One more thing, Story is conflict, without conflict, there is no story.?

    You say her husband is excited for the lead character… if there is no conflict between the husband and the lead character, what is his purpose in moving the story forward?

    If the Husband is okay with the situation, why not have the lead character be single instead of married? Or replace the husband with a best friend character.

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  2. Posted: March 21, 2020In: Romance

    A married woman accidentally drinks a love potion and falls in love with a shy prince. Her open-hearted husband is excited for her, but the King isn’t.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on March 21, 2020 at 2:31 pm

    Things are happening too the lead character, but you haven't told us what the lead character must do about it. Is she going to try to find an antidote for the love potions? Is she going to try to win the prince's heart? What is the lead character's goal?  

    Things are happening too the lead character, but you haven’t told us what the lead character must do about it.

    Is she going to try to find an antidote for the love potions?

    Is she going to try to win the prince’s heart?

    What is the lead character’s goal?

     

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  3. Posted: March 18, 2020In: Thriller

    Many believe the most dreaded words in a hospital are ‘Code Blue, they are wrong. Although serious, they are not even close to those that strike fear in the most hardened hospital administrator: “We are about to exceed ‘Surge Capacity'”.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on March 19, 2020 at 9:20 pm

    Who is the lead character? What is their goal? What is standing in their way?

    Who is the lead character?

    What is their goal?

    What is standing in their way?

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