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  1. Posted: April 8, 2020In: Fantasy

    After mythology’s most vicious monsters and history’s most heinous criminals escape from hell, a neurotic college-sophomore finds herself imbued with the power to send these evildoers back from whence they came.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on April 8, 2020 at 3:52 pm

    TV show?

    TV show?

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  2. Posted: April 6, 2020In: Horror

    After receiving a private invite to compete,? five amateur cooks find themselves trapped by elite cannibals and must cook to win in order to survive.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on April 6, 2020 at 5:33 pm

    You should give us a lead character (instead of 5) and hint at what their goal is.Because as written, it appears the goal is to win the cannibal cooking competition. (The C.C.C. ?)However that doesn't seem likely, Escape would probably be a better goal.Or to put it another way, 'Survive' is kinda aRead more

    You should give us a lead character (instead of 5) and hint at what their goal is.

    Because as written, it appears the goal is to win the cannibal cooking competition. (The C.C.C. ?)

    However that doesn’t seem likely, Escape would probably be a better goal.

    Or to put it another way, ‘Survive’ is kinda a passive goal. It can work sometimes, like in the first Hunger Games. So I wouldn’t completely say it couldn’t be the goal but, fight or escape are far more interesting goals.

    Anyway, not a bad premise with a many different directions the story could easily go.

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  3. Posted: April 4, 2020In: Horror

    An overnight caregiver and a bored stiff succubus form an unlikely alliance to launch a dark web speed dating site.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on April 4, 2020 at 3:01 am

    Where is the conflict? (And what are the stakes?)

    Where is the conflict? (And what are the stakes?)

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