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  1. Posted: February 25, 2020In: Student Loglines

    When dark and disturbing children’s drawings come alive. Its creator, a little girl distressed and insecure, must face and erase these drawings from her life before they control her forever.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on February 25, 2020 at 7:54 am

    I like the premise, has a Stephen King feel to it. Especially if the little girl was put up to, Drawing her fears, by a "Randolf Flagg" Type character pretending to be a child psychiatrist. Here is an attempt but it will probably need to be tweaked, to more fully represent the story you have writtenRead more

    I like the premise, has a Stephen King feel to it.

    Especially if the little girl was put up to, Drawing her fears, by a “Randolf Flagg” Type character pretending to be a child psychiatrist.

    Here is an attempt but it will probably need to be tweaked, to more fully represent the story you have written (or the story you visualize)

    “When her drawings come alive, a terrified 5-year-old has until midnight to overcome each one of the fears her drawings represent or be sucked into her paintings forever.”

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  2. Posted: February 21, 2020In: Student Loglines

    When the city is devoured by war. A surviving girl on the verge of madness and a hungry old rat cross their lonely paths in order to find their salvation.

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    Added an answer on February 22, 2020 at 1:39 pm

    What does salvation look like on the screen?If it's to escape the city, then you should say, "escape the city"If it's to find food for her loved ones who are starving, then you should say that.Because, if you say the lead character's goal is to find salvation, then you should tell us what salvationRead more

    What does salvation look like on the screen?

    If it’s to escape the city, then you should say, “escape the city”

    If it’s to find food for her loved ones who are starving, then you should say that.

    Because, if you say the lead character’s goal is to find salvation, then you should tell us what salvation means to the lead character.

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  3. Posted: February 15, 2020In: Fantasy

    After the climate change destroyed the balance between the real and fantastic world in Kamakura, a young woman whit magical Powers decides to contact two documentary filmakers to help her investigaste the supernatural events that happen in the city.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on February 17, 2020 at 8:57 pm

    The best place to start with this logline would be the Conflict.What is standing in the lead characters' way? (Then add it to the logline)Other than that I like the concept

    The best place to start with this logline would be the Conflict.

    What is standing in the lead characters’ way? (Then add it to the logline)

    Other than that I like the concept

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