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An ex-hit-man comes out of retirement to track down the gangsters that killed his dog and took everything from him.
Just so you know, there is actually a category for "Examples"As for your example of a John Wick logline, I think it's pretty solid. Short and to the point.Here would be my try at it."When the dog his wife gave him is killed, a widowed hitman comes out of retirement to hunt down those responsible witRead more
Just so you know, there is actually a category for “Examples”
As for your example of a John Wick logline, I think it’s pretty solid. Short and to the point.
Here would be my try at it.
“When the dog his wife gave him is killed, a widowed hitman comes out of retirement to hunt down those responsible with extreme prejudice.”
See lessAfter an immodest teenager gets jilted at the school dance by her boyfriend and then loses the homecoming competition, she stumbles upon family secrets of lies and an unsolved murder mystery that turns her life upside down.
The setup and the goal should match.Your logline starts with one setup: The lead gets jilted (Which would imply being jilted is what the story is about)Then changes to family secrets.If the goal of the lead character is to solve the family secret. Then what sets the story in motion is when the leadRead more
The setup and the goal should match.
Your logline starts with one setup: The lead gets jilted (Which would imply being jilted is what the story is about)
Then changes to family secrets.
If the goal of the lead character is to solve the family secret. Then what sets the story in motion is when the lead discovers the family has a secret.
See lessA pair of young lovers from rival lobster fishing gangs in Maine must unite their communities in order to defend their territories against the encroaching Canadian lobster mafia.
Pretty solid and gets the story across. If you change anything, don't change much.
Pretty solid and gets the story across. If you change anything, don’t change much.
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