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Introverted twins move to a new town where they endure (racially motivated) harassment; one finally decided to fight back.
You should give a face to the bad guy. A specific bad guy that is a focal point for the reader.It doesn't mean this character is the only one harassing the twins, it just means he is the lead instigator or main Harasser.
You should give a face to the bad guy. A specific bad guy that is a focal point for the reader.
It doesn’t mean this character is the only one harassing the twins, it just means he is the lead instigator or main Harasser.
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I like the built-in conflict based on the lead character's personality.You can drop, "Due to recession," if you want to tighten the logline a little, (Don't drop it in the story, just the logline)Also if being forced to work for his wife causes the lead to have a goal I think that would help the logRead more
I like the built-in conflict based on the lead character’s personality.
You can drop, “Due to recession,” if you want to tighten the logline a little, (Don’t drop it in the story, just the logline)
Also if being forced to work for his wife causes the lead to have a goal I think that would help the logline.
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Let me try a logline example, obviously, yours would be different because I don't know all the details of your story.-----"When a Quarreling couple come into possession of a demonic book that feeds off anger, the two must solve their issues before their volatile relationship empowers the evil tome tRead more
Let me try a logline example, obviously, yours would be different because I don’t know all the details of your story.
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“When a Quarreling couple come into possession of a demonic book that feeds off anger, the two must solve their issues before their volatile relationship empowers the evil tome to devour their souls”
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The story, of course, being a metaphor for how a bad relationship can eat your very soul.
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