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An old, abusive slave owner switches body with his slave who gives him a taste of his own medicine
I think the real question is, is this story, torture porn or not?If that is what the story is about,? logline actually works.A mean white slave owner switches bodies with his slave, and then the audience watches in glee as the former slave owner is beaten, whipped, degraded, and abuse, end of story.Read more
I think the real question is, is this story, torture porn or not?
If that is what the story is about,? logline actually works.
A mean white slave owner switches bodies with his slave, and then the audience watches in glee as the former slave owner is beaten, whipped, degraded, and abuse, end of story…
However, if this is a morality tale, then you need to give your lead character a goal.
So what goal would be the irony of ironies?
Perhaps after he is transformed into a slave, and beaten by his former slave turned white, he must escape and find the underground railroad, the very people that in the beginning of the story he called traitors to the south.
And on top of that all his slave owner buddies are now after him with dogs and shotguns, and he realizes that skin color is just that, and nothing more, he is still the same person on the inside but just because his skin is now black he is seen as less than human.
Perhaps the key is crossing the Mason Dixon line.
Once the lead character crosses the line into the north he’s is changed back, but with a new perspective on race and what makes a person human, because the people who helped him were more human than his former friends who turned on him the moment his skin changed.
See lessA young medium is tasked with cleansing an old mansion but the spirits would kill to protect their dark secrets.
First, is the "Who" important, and by who, I mean the person or people who hire the medium? I only ask because if it's her sister hires her to cleanse the house, that is one story, if it's some mega-corporation it's another. ... Also, what will she lose if she fails in her mission, is it just her liRead more
First, is the “Who” important, and by who, I mean the person or people who hire the medium?
I only ask because if it’s her sister hires her to cleanse the house, that is one story, if it’s some mega-corporation it’s another.
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Also, what will she lose if she fails in her mission, is it just her life?
Perhaps her credibility is at stake, maybe she has been accused of being a fraud and this is her last chance at proving herself?
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Also, is the medium legitimate or a fraud. The story would be interesting either way, Imagine if the medium was a scam artist who doesn’t believe in ghosts, using tricks to fool her clients, now she goes to the house to perform an elaborate hoax cleansing and suddenly she is faced with a real malevolent entity.
See lessA crush kindled comedienne and?a connection delusional fan influence a viral coma recovery star’s search for a tramatized teen
You might have gotten a little too fancy with this one. 1: Not sure what is a "crush kindled comedienne" 2: connection delusional fan... do you mean a stalker? 3: "a viral coma recovery," again I don't know what this means In other words, after reading this logline, I still don't know what the storyRead more
You might have gotten a little too fancy with this one.
1: Not sure what is a “crush kindled comedienne”
2: connection delusional fan… do you mean a stalker?
3: “a viral coma recovery,” again I don’t know what this means
In other words, after reading this logline, I still don’t know what the story is about
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