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This romantic, sci-fi action fantasy is set in a medieval world where war is common and survival is a daily struggle. The young heroine, Betha must persevere to overcome beasts, barbarians, ice Vikings, mythical creatures, elves and savages throughout the kingdom who all want her head.
I think you need to tell us 'why' all these creatures want her head. What is so special about her, or what is so special about her mission/goal that everyone wants her dead? What are they trying to stop? Take this as an example: "When she discovers she's the descendant of the last dragon, a headstroRead more
I think you need to tell us ‘why’ all these creatures want her head. What is so special about her, or what is so special about her mission/goal that everyone wants her dead?
What are they trying to stop?
Take this as an example: “When she discovers she’s the descendant of the last dragon, a headstrong village girl must…” then tell us what her goal is and what she must do to achieve it.
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Just curious, who does she recount her story too? Is it an AA meeting? Also, does the lead have a goal that causes her to recite the story? (So at the end of the script there is something that is resolved from the lead telling the story?) Anyway, I was only asking because for a story like this I douRead more
Just curious, who does she recount her story too?
Is it an AA meeting?
Also, does the lead have a goal that causes her to recite the story? (So at the end of the script there is something that is resolved from the lead telling the story?)
Anyway, I was only asking because for a story like this I doubt you will have a traditional logline, but the logline is short enough if there is an important element to the story that is missing from the logline, then it wouldn’t hurt to add a few more words.
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"When she's tormented by an evil entity, a businesswoman must help her psychic husband escape from a mental institution so the two of them can discover a way to banish the malevolent being."
“When she’s tormented by an evil entity, a businesswoman must help her psychic husband escape from a mental institution so the two of them can discover a way to banish the malevolent being.”
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