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“When an aspiring young architect loses his mother to cancer and his world is turned upside down, he discovers unlikely inspiration in the pages of a drug addict’s journal while on a dual mission to obtain his dream job and find a higher meaning to his personal tragedy.”
This is the kind of story I like and enjoy However, when it comes to the logline, I am not exactly sure what sets the story in motion, is it the death of his mother or finding the journal. Anyway, good luck with this,
This is the kind of story I like and enjoy
However, when it comes to the logline, I am not exactly sure what sets the story in motion, is it the death of his mother or finding the journal.
Anyway, good luck with this,
See lessWhen a deadly plague devastates the small village she’s passing, a cloistered sister, just out of the Abbey, hunts down clues to the seemingly magical affliction in order to discover who created the plague and save the town.
Possible Title: "Sister Serenity"
Possible Title: “Sister Serenity”
See lessA group of rich, snobby college students take their wheelchair-bound female friend to a cabin for the weekend where they are attacked by a pack of female zombies. The students can?t figure out why until the girl discovers that these students murdered them? and they are seeking revenge!
Solid premise, similar to Ghost Story, but with zombies. After reading the logline a couple of times, I am getting the impression that the wheelchair-bound friend is the lead character but the logline is written as if the rich, snobby college students are the main protagonists. As a result, (And ifRead more
Solid premise, similar to Ghost Story, but with zombies.
After reading the logline a couple of times, I am getting the impression that the wheelchair-bound friend is the lead character but the logline is written as if the rich, snobby college students are the main protagonists.
As a result, (And if I am correct) What is the lead character’s goal? Does she want to save her friends? Does she want to escape? Does she want to defeat the vengeful zombies?
I like the story idea, but I think the logline should be re-arranged just a little bit to emphasize the lead character and her goal.
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