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A hired thief steals a magic relic awakening 12 mercenary monks; all will team up to keep the relic away from an ancient power hungry Templar.
I think the previous logline was a better attempt. A lead character needs a goal. In the previous logline attempt, the lead had the goal of saving his son.
I think the previous logline was a better attempt. A lead character needs a goal. In the previous logline attempt, the lead had the goal of saving his son.
See lessUpside down in a binge, Hank Thomson loses a key that came with a cat that nobody wanted, putting his unborn child in danger; Bad luck for Hank since that cat?s key belongs to a trinity of badass’ that will kill the woman carrying his future. “So just remember, Hank!”
Wording is important. You say nobody wants the cat, but then say, the cat is owned by not one, but three bad guys and they trusted the cat so much they put a mysterious key on it, and now they are desperately looking for the cat and key. So the story sounds interesting. But the logline is confusingRead more
Wording is important. You say nobody wants the cat, but then say, the cat is owned by not one, but three bad guys and they trusted the cat so much they put a mysterious key on it, and now they are desperately looking for the cat and key.
So the story sounds interesting. But the logline is confusing and probably doesn’t do your story justice.
See lessAfter his neighbour criminal gets arrested, a jaded man takes the criminal’s young son to his home and must decide whether he will take him to an orphanage or keep taking care of him. (short film – p.s. my protagonist grew up in orphanage)
When and where does this story take place? Orphanages don't really exist in modern America.? We have a foster care system. However, if this story takes place in the 1800's or a third world country then it should probably be stated in the logline.
When and where does this story take place?
Orphanages don’t really exist in modern America.? We have a foster care system. However, if this story takes place in the 1800’s or a third world country then it should probably be stated in the logline.
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