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After an explosion, a marine wakes up in a place with other people from different times, his mission is to lead the group to recover artifacts spread in different times in history and avoid an alien invasion in the future.
Second attempt: (I am taking a few liberties with this one) After a marine awakes with people from different ages, he must lead the group to recover the three parts of the spear of destiny spread throughout history to repel an alien invasion in the future.?
Second attempt: (I am taking a few liberties with this one)
After a marine awakes with people from different ages, he must lead the group to recover the three parts of the spear of destiny spread throughout history to repel an alien invasion in the future.?
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"After a failed filmmaker makes a deal with the Devil for his film to be greenlit, his film must win an Oscar or his family are forfeit as payment." This attempt I did is just an example: However you should tell us what the deal is and what the consequences are. Hope that helped, good luck with thisRead more
“After a failed filmmaker makes a deal with the Devil for his film to be greenlit, his film must win an Oscar or his family are forfeit as payment.”
This attempt I did is just an example: However you should tell us what the deal is and what the consequences are.
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
See lessAfter an explosion, a marine wakes up in a place with other people from different times, his mission is to lead the group to recover artifacts spread in different times in history and avoid an alien invasion in the future.
You have two inciting events in your logline. 1) After an explosion, 2) a marine wakes up in a place with other people from different times, I would chose the second one, I don't think the first one is necessary to the logline. ----- "After a marine awakes with people from different times, he must lRead more
You have two inciting events in your logline.
1) After an explosion,
2) a marine wakes up in a place with other people from different times,
I would chose the second one, I don’t think the first one is necessary to the logline.
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“After a marine awakes with people from different times, he must lead the group to recover artifacts spread throughout history to avoid an alien invasion in the future.”
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Still not sure what the artifacts have to do with the alien invasion but I hope this example helped consolidate your original logline.
Hope that helped, good luck with this!!
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