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in order to love his wife, a man must have affairs.
If he makes it a comedy the idea will seem a little close to Hall Pass where the fire has gone out of the marriage and in order to get it back the wife gives the husband a "Hall Pass" to have an affair.
If he makes it a comedy the idea will seem a little close to Hall Pass where the fire has gone out of the marriage and in order to get it back the wife gives the husband a “Hall Pass” to have an affair.
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This logline is way to long and confusing. I would start the logline with the lead character instead of the team. In your attempt you don't mention the lead character till the very last line. (Unless the ex-husband is the lead character)
This logline is way to long and confusing.
I would start the logline with the lead character instead of the team. In your attempt you don’t mention the lead character till the very last line. (Unless the ex-husband is the lead character)
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I think this is a solid attempt. I would just take away, "Self Made" Maybe even "Cocky" Not sure if they are needed in the logline. Also, since you identified the lead as a "Porn Producer" It will be assumed the film he is making an adult film. ----- "When a failing porn producer unknowingly uses stRead more
I think this is a solid attempt. I would just take away, “Self Made” Maybe even “Cocky” Not sure if they are needed in the logline.
Also, since you identified the lead as a “Porn Producer” It will be assumed the film he is making an adult film.
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“When a failing porn producer unknowingly uses stolen money to make his film, he must fight off the gangsters who claim it’s their property”
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However, your original logine is good, this would just be a little tightening.