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A Harlem orphan must face the federal Government and the world's largest corporations after he mysteriously wakes up on his 18th birthday with $458 Billion to his name.
"After 485 Billion is deposited in his bank account on his 18th birthday, a Harlem Orphan begins giving away the money when a greedy I.R.S. tax auditor comes after him and his newly acquired money." This logline attempt still needs work. but the idea would be he realizes the government is going to tRead more
“After 485 Billion is deposited in his bank account on his 18th birthday, a Harlem Orphan begins giving away the money when a greedy I.R.S. tax auditor comes after him and his newly acquired money.”
This logline attempt still needs work. but the idea would be he realizes the government is going to take the money so be attempts to give away as much as he can before they freeze his accounts.
See less?On his first day at Walmart, an ex-marine with PTSD must save his sister after eco-terrorists seize the store and take hostages.
Nice comment dpg. One of the idea's I had was, the main bad guy just wants money but he recruited true believers who actually have problems with Walmart. (He's going to leave them holding the bag while he escapes) Over the course of the movie the Walmart employee's and the "True Believers" holding tRead more
Nice comment dpg.
One of the idea’s I had was, the main bad guy just wants money but he recruited true believers who actually have problems with Walmart. (He’s going to leave them holding the bag while he escapes)
Over the course of the movie the Walmart employee’s and the “True Believers” holding them hostage will come to an understanding of one another.
As for the main character, that PTSD idea is terrific. Obviously he/she has to overcome that.
See lessA Harlem orphan must face the federal Government and the world's largest corporations after he mysteriously wakes up on his 18th birthday with $458 Billion to his name.
I don't have enough to go on for a good logline re-write, elements are there but I don't understand what "Face the federal Government and the worlds largest corporations" entails. "After 485 Billion is deposited in his bank account on his 18th birthday, a Harlem Orphan must..." After that you shouldRead more
I don’t have enough to go on for a good logline re-write, elements are there but I don’t understand what “Face the federal Government and the worlds largest corporations” entails.
“After 485 Billion is deposited in his bank account on his 18th birthday, a Harlem Orphan must…”
After that you should be specific about what you mean by face the government. (And the bad guy should have a face. One guy who we can boo)
Anyway, I love the setup!
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
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