1. Posted: January 11, 2014In:

    ?On his first day at Walmart, an ex-marine with PTSD must save his sister after eco-terrorists seize the store and take hostages.

    Richiev Singularity

    Thanks for the help guys, I think I'm going to begin outlining. (Yeah I'm one of those writers, I need an outline or I get stuck halfway through and it just sits in the proverbial drawer)

    Thanks for the help guys, I think I’m going to begin outlining. (Yeah I’m one of those writers, I need an outline or I get stuck halfway through and it just sits in the proverbial drawer)

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  2. Posted: January 3, 2014In:

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    Richiev Singularity

    I think this last logline attempt is pretty close, however; because you have "Time Traveling Astronaut" the reader will probably understand this is a futuristic sci-fi story. ----- "To stop the government from terminating his wife's illegal pregnancy, a time-traveling astronaut agrees to hunt the woRead more

    I think this last logline attempt is pretty close, however; because you have “Time Traveling Astronaut” the reader will probably understand this is a futuristic sci-fi story.
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    “To stop the government from terminating his wife’s illegal pregnancy, a time-traveling astronaut agrees to hunt the worlds most wanted terrorist: His own unborn son.”
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    Hope that helped, good luck with this!

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  3. Posted: January 6, 2014In:

    A beautiful, ambitious maid and a graceful but married Duke are trying to save their love in a cruel medieval society. Tables are suddenly turned after a lack of loyalty and the discovery of the maid's real origin.

    Richiev Singularity

    Sorry, one more minor tweek :) Keep instead of keeping. ----- When a married Duke, falls for his ambitions chamber maid, the two conspire to usurp the king while fighting to keep their illicit love a secret.?

    Sorry, one more minor tweek 🙂 Keep instead of keeping.
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    When a married Duke, falls for his ambitions chamber maid, the two conspire to usurp the king while fighting to keep their illicit love a secret.?

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