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A beautiful, ambitious maid and a graceful but married Duke are trying to save their love in a cruel medieval society. Tables are suddenly turned after a lack of loyalty and the discovery of the maid's real origin.
Not a bad premise but might need that "One more thing" to draw attention. How about upping the stakes a bit: ----- "When a married Duke, falls for his ambitions chamber maid, the two conspire to usurp the king while fighting to keeping their illicit love a secret." ----- Hope that helped, good luckRead more
Not a bad premise but might need that “One more thing” to draw attention.
How about upping the stakes a bit:
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“When a married Duke, falls for his ambitions chamber maid, the two conspire to usurp the king while fighting to keeping their illicit love a secret.”
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Hope that helped, good luck with this!
See lessAfter inheriting his Uncles’s dairy farm in remote Chechnya, a Harvard Business School drop-out finds himself at war with the Chechen Mafia over his Uncle’s backdoor drugs and prostitution racket .?
I don't think you need to tell us he inherited from his uncle in the logline, just that he inherited it. You can cut "Living there" as well, it's just important that the women are in danger. Here is a go using your logline as a base. ----- "After discovering the farm he?s inherited is a front for prRead more
I don’t think you need to tell us he inherited from his uncle in the logline, just that he inherited it.
You can cut “Living there” as well, it’s just important that the women are in danger.
Here is a go using your logline as a base.
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“After discovering the farm he?s inherited is a front for prostitution, a smooth talking Harvard drop-out must protect the women from a greedy Chechen Mafia.”
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Hope that helped, good luck with this!
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This is a little shorter but I believe still works. "When a repressed writer is revived after dying, he must stop his disembodied soul inflicting the dark fantasies from his novels on the woman he loves" Soulless is a good title, you could also call the movie "Id" as well.
This is a little shorter but I believe still works.
“When a repressed writer is revived after dying, he must stop his disembodied soul inflicting the dark fantasies from his novels on the woman he loves”
Soulless is a good title, you could also call the movie “Id” as well.
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