1. Posted: January 6, 2014In:

    The host of a wildly successful all-star television variety show finds himself trapped in a virtual world full of limitations and hardships… OUR world.

    Richiev Singularity

    You have given us a situation not a story. However it seems like an interesting situation. 1: What does your lead want 2: What is standing in the leads way give us those two things and you will have a story. Hope that helped, good luck with this!

    You have given us a situation not a story. However it seems like an interesting situation.

    1: What does your lead want
    2: What is standing in the leads way

    give us those two things and you will have a story.

    Hope that helped, good luck with this!

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  2. Posted: January 5, 2014In:

    After defrauding his friends and family and subsequently faking his own suicide, Harvey returns years later to find a last-minute match for a kidney transplant he desperately needs to stay alive.

    Richiev Singularity

    I love the built in conflict. not only will those he defrauded be angry with him but he will see first hand how his selfish actions affected those he swindled. Great concept. (btw DPG's re-write is on the money)

    I love the built in conflict. not only will those he defrauded be angry with him but he will see first hand how his selfish actions affected those he swindled.

    Great concept.

    (btw DPG’s re-write is on the money)

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  3. Posted: January 5, 2014In:

    After defrauding his friends and family and subsequently faking his own suicide, Harvey returns years later to find a last-minute match for a kidney transplant he desperately needs to stay alive.

    Richiev Singularity

    Liver let die...

    Liver let die…

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