Sign Up Sign Up

Captcha Click on image to update the captcha.

Have an account? Sign In Now

Sign In Sign In

Forgot Password?

If you'd like access, Sign Up Here

Forgot Password Forgot Password

Lost your password? Please enter your email address. You will receive a link and will create a new password via email.

Captcha Click on image to update the captcha.

Have an account? Sign In Now

Sorry, you do not have permission to ask a question, You must login to ask a question.

Forgot Password?

To see everything, Sign Up Here

Sorry, you do not have permission to ask a question, You must login to ask a question.

Forgot Password?

To see everything, Sign Up Here

Please briefly explain why you feel this question should be reported.

Please briefly explain why you feel this answer should be reported.

Please briefly explain why you feel this user should be reported.

Logline It! Logo Logline It! Logo
Sign InSign Up

Logline It!

Logline It! Navigation

  • Sign Up
  • Logline Generator
  • Learn our simple Logline Formula
  • Search Loglines
Search
Post Your Logline

Mobile menu

Close
Post Your Logline
  • Signup
  • Sign Up
  • Logline Generator
  • Learn our simple Logline Formula
  • Search Loglines
  • About
  • Questions
  • Answers
  • Best Answers
  1. Posted: September 23, 2013In: Public

    An inhibited accountant who detest musicals struggles to remain sane when he wakes up in a world where everybody sing and dance.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on September 24, 2013 at 2:11 am

    "After waking in a world where everyone sings and dances, an inhibited accountant who detest musicals must find a way to return to the real world before he's driven insane."

    “After waking in a world where everyone sings and dances, an inhibited accountant who detest musicals must find a way to return to the real world before he’s driven insane.”

    See less
    • 0
    • Share
      Share
      • Share on Facebook
      • Share on Twitter
      • Share on LinkedIn
      • Share on WhatsApp
  2. Posted: September 20, 2013In: Public

    After his daughter's forced to spend the week at his job and discovers he's actually cool at work, a henpecked husband, begins to stand up for himself against his, domineering wife.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on September 21, 2013 at 9:52 pm

    While I agree the daughter could very well be the protagonist. (with some changes) My problem is, the story ends when the dad finally confronts his domineering wife and sticks up for himself. that's the final conflict, Story arc: Dad just accepts his home life the way it is. A catalyst occurs and heRead more

    While I agree the daughter could very well be the protagonist. (with some changes)

    My problem is, the story ends when the dad finally confronts his domineering wife and sticks up for himself. that’s the final conflict,

    Story arc: Dad just accepts his home life the way it is. A catalyst occurs and he begins to question they way he’s being treated. Final conflict; when he stands up for himself.

    Since the mom is the antagonist
    and the final conflict is between the husband and wife, it seems more natural for the father to be the lead.

    The protagonist confronting the antagonist.

    See less
    • 0
    • Share
      Share
      • Share on Facebook
      • Share on Twitter
      • Share on LinkedIn
      • Share on WhatsApp
  3. Posted: September 20, 2013In: Public

    After his daughter's forced to spend the week at his job and discovers he's actually cool at work, a henpecked husband, begins to stand up for himself against his, domineering wife.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on September 21, 2013 at 2:37 pm

    That is a great question dpg, In my mind the daughter doesn't know about the affair but I am not sold on that. If it can be more compelling the other way I would gladly go with it.

    That is a great question dpg, In my mind the daughter doesn’t know about the affair but I am not sold on that. If it can be more compelling the other way I would gladly go with it.

    See less
    • 0
    • Share
      Share
      • Share on Facebook
      • Share on Twitter
      • Share on LinkedIn
      • Share on WhatsApp
1 … 1,057 1,058 1,059 1,060 1,061 … 1,233

Sidebar

Stats

  • Loglines 8,002
  • Reviews 32,189
  • Best Reviews 629
  • Users 3,734

screenwriting courses

Adv 120x600

aalan

Explore

  • Signup

Footer

© 2022 Karel Segers. All Rights Reserved
With Love from Immersion Screenwriting.