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  1. Posted: September 20, 2013In: Public

    After his daughter's forced to spend the week at his job and discovers he's actually cool at work, a henpecked husband, begins to stand up for himself against his, domineering wife.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on September 21, 2013 at 11:54 am

    Nice response DPG. And yes I have thought about who should be the main character that's rather astute. ----- As for the daughter being forced to go to work with her father. The school assignment is for them to spend a week at work with one of their parents. Easy enough to create. As for being forcedRead more

    Nice response DPG. And yes I have thought about who should be the main character that’s rather astute.
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    As for the daughter being forced to go to work with her father. The school assignment is for them to spend a week at work with one of their parents. Easy enough to create.

    As for being forced, the daughter wants to go to work with her “cool” uncle who sells cars. (Even though he isn’t a parent)

    The mom and uncle are having an affair and that would interfere with their “special lunches”

    It’s the mom who puts the foot down and says “You’re going to work with your father and that’s final!” Which is the last thing she would ever want to do since she knows her boring father, goes to a boring job and works with boring people.
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    About the Premise
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    It’s based on a theory of mine that, who we are is who we’re with.

    Who we are at church is different that who we are at a sports bar watching a game.
    A mob boss might be a ruthless killer at work, but a loving family man at home.
    A girl might be a strait-A student at school but go crazy at rock concerts.

    So I thought, what if there was a guy who everyone loved at work, he was “The man” (Well, the King) but he gets home and he is domineered by his wife and because she doesn’t respect him his children don’t either.

    Then ‘what if’ his work life and his home life collided???

    The catalyst is his daughter coming to work with him.

    Anyway that’s my thought process, this is still in the planning stage and the lead could easily be changed.

    I really picture a Steve Carrel type (Dan in real life) as the lead.

    Thanks again for your well thought out response, you have made some great points.

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  2. Posted: September 20, 2013In: Public

    After his daughter's forced to spend the week at his job and discovers he's actually cool at work, a henpecked husband, begins to stand up for himself against his, domineering wife.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on September 20, 2013 at 2:38 pm

    His daughter spends a week with him at his work. He's a trouble shooter and on his way to becoming VP. Everyone loves him at work, They are like "You the King" (Because his last name is King) There's a slow progression of him winning over his daughter. But the more she grows to see him in this new lRead more

    His daughter spends a week with him at his work. He’s a trouble shooter and on his way to becoming VP. Everyone loves him at work, They are like “You the King” (Because his last name is King)

    There’s a slow progression of him winning over his daughter. But the more she grows to see him in this new light. the more uncomfortable he is at how he’s being treated at home.

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  3. Posted: September 20, 2013In: Public

    After his daughter's forced to spend the week at his job and discovers he's actually cool at work, a henpecked husband, begins to stand up for himself against his, domineering wife.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on September 20, 2013 at 1:23 pm

    Stakes: The respect of his daughter, which until she seen him at work she never had but through their week they spend together she beings to respect her father and it motivates him because he doesn't want to lose her respect now that he has it.

    Stakes: The respect of his daughter, which until she seen him at work she never had but through their week they spend together she beings to respect her father and it motivates him because he doesn’t want to lose her respect now that he has it.

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