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After his daughter's forced to spend the week at his job and discovers he's actually cool at work, a henpecked husband, begins to stand up for himself against his, domineering wife.
Great points dpg. At work Johnathan King is well respected but at home his kids talk back and his wife treats him as an atm. That is how it's always been. But when his daughter is given an assignment to go to work with him his two worlds collide. His daughter sees this other side of her father and hRead more
Great points dpg.
At work Johnathan King is well respected but at home his kids talk back and his wife treats him as an atm. That is how it’s always been.
But when his daughter is given an assignment to go to work with him his two worlds collide. His daughter sees this other side of her father and he begins to realizes how he’s being treated at home isn’t right.
His goal: To get the same respect at home that he gets at work
Inciting incident: His daughter given the school assignment to go to work with him.
Bad guy: His wife who doesn’t treat him with respect and is having an affair with his brother.
It’s kinda a middle age coming of age story.
See lessWhen the president fails to take his daughter camping during his reelection campaign, she must outsmart his security staff and kidnap him, or risk losing him to the job for another four years. //Anya
In a loglines it helps if you tell it from one point of view. (The main character) When the president... (This is the presidents point of view) She must outsmart... (This is the first daughters point of view) Maybe something like this: "After her presidential father breaks his promise to take her caRead more
In a loglines it helps if you tell it from one point of view. (The main character)
When the president… (This is the presidents point of view)
She must outsmart… (This is the first daughters point of view)
Maybe something like this:
“After her presidential father breaks his promise to take her camping, a determined first daughter schemes to kidnap him so they can spend one weekend together before she loses him for another four years.”
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
See lessWhen a lonely 30-year old boss dreams about a mirror that shows you the way you?re going to die. He decides to find it but isn?t happy with what he sees, so he has to change his life so he can die happy. /Matilda
I find this interesting. A little bit "Christmas Carol" but with a twist. (A mirror instead of a ghost) I do think something needs to stand in his way. How about something like this: ----- "After discovering a mirror that can show your death. a lonely 30-year-old, vows to change his fate, but the neRead more
I find this interesting. A little bit “Christmas Carol” but with a twist. (A mirror instead of a ghost) I do think something needs to stand in his way.
How about something like this:
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“After discovering a mirror that can show your death. a lonely 30-year-old, vows to change his fate, but the new person he becomes ruffles his old friends and family.”
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The idea would be that his “Friends” and “Family” use him: for money, for favors, to get out of trouble. Once he decides to change his fate he isn’t Mr. “Old Reliable” anymore and they don’t like that.
This would add some conflict.
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
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