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  1. Posted: August 17, 2013In: Public

    When a governmental Space Station gets taken by a terrorist organisation, its headstrong Chief Architect must escape upon learning that the terrorists have also kidnapped her disabled husband back on earth.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on August 20, 2013 at 4:42 am

    If you wanted the son on the space station how about this for a logline: ----- "When her sons class is kidnapped while on a space station she designed, a head strong architect has two hours infiltrate the station and save them, before the Eco-Terrorists begin killing prisoners." ----- Just a thoughtRead more

    If you wanted the son on the space station how about this for a logline:
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    “When her sons class is kidnapped while on a space station she designed, a head strong architect has two hours infiltrate the station and save them, before the Eco-Terrorists begin killing prisoners.”
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    Just a thought.

    Remember, when you do a “Monster in the house” movie. There must be a monster (Terrorist) a house (Space station) and Sin

    Perhaps the owner of the space station is dumping his garbage in an illegal way and the Eco-Terrorist’s claims are true.

    The hero will make the terrorist go ‘splat’ as long as they have her son. But perhaps there is a hidden bad guy as well.

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  2. Posted: August 17, 2013In: Public

    When a governmental Space Station gets taken by a terrorist organisation, its headstrong Chief Architect must escape upon learning that the terrorists have also kidnapped her disabled husband back on earth.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on August 19, 2013 at 12:36 pm

    Make sure to show her 'talent' early in the film. Maybe she is doing repairs (or an inspection) and opens a hatch the crew doesn't know about. She tells them "The space station is full of these little crawl spaces if you know where to look" Of course when the space station is taken by the terroristRead more

    Make sure to show her ‘talent’ early in the film.

    Maybe she is doing repairs (or an inspection) and opens a hatch the crew doesn’t know about. She tells them “The space station is full of these little crawl spaces if you know where to look”

    Of course when the space station is taken by the terrorist she will use this special ‘talent’ to thwart the bad guys.

    Anyway, I think you have a good idea. (A little like lockout but with a much different lead character)

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  3. Posted: August 17, 2013In: Public

    When a governmental Space Station gets taken by a terrorist organisation, its headstrong Chief Architect must escape upon learning that the terrorists have also kidnapped her disabled husband back on earth.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on August 18, 2013 at 11:35 pm

    I am worried from reading your logline that you may have a story problem. You have terrorists in a space station (an enclosed space) and a head strong architect (who presumably knows all the secret in's and outs of the station) a perfect setup for a movie. And then you have the lead character leaveRead more

    I am worried from reading your logline that you may have a story problem.

    You have terrorists in a space station (an enclosed space) and a head strong architect (who presumably knows all the secret in’s and outs of the station) a perfect setup for a movie. And then you have the lead character leave the station and go to earth. Kinda a letdown.

    You should have the family members held hostage on the space station. The lead should have to save the space station and save the family members. All the action should take place in the enclosed area.

    Anyway those are just my thoughts, hope that helped, good luck with this!

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