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  1. Posted: August 12, 2013In: Public

    When the world’s economic system collapses causing great social upheaval, a rising political savior steps in with a new economic idea where all economy is stored inside the human body, beginning the formation of a powerful Governmental global revolution and resulting in one of the greatest tribulation periods of all time.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on August 15, 2013 at 8:32 am

    And if you can, add irony. In my example the lead is agnostic but is risking her life to save her fundamentalist brother who refuses to deny God in spite the punishment being death.

    And if you can, add irony. In my example the lead is agnostic but is risking her life to save her fundamentalist brother who refuses to deny God in spite the punishment being death.

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  2. Posted: August 12, 2013In: Public

    When the world’s economic system collapses causing great social upheaval, a rising political savior steps in with a new economic idea where all economy is stored inside the human body, beginning the formation of a powerful Governmental global revolution and resulting in one of the greatest tribulation periods of all time.

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    Added an answer on August 15, 2013 at 8:29 am

    Here would be an example of a logline told from the point of view of a protagonist instead of an antagonist. "After her brother is detained in a religious death camp for refusing to deny God, an agnostic girl travels across the country in defiance of the new world leader's liberty laws, to help herRead more

    Here would be an example of a logline told from the point of view of a protagonist instead of an antagonist.

    “After her brother is detained in a religious death camp for refusing to deny God, an agnostic girl travels across the country in defiance of the new world leader’s liberty laws, to help her brother escape before he’s beheaded.”

    Of course my example is way to long but loglines should tell a story”: An inciting incident, a lead, a goal and something standing in the leads way.

    Hope that helped, good luck with this!

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  3. Posted: August 14, 2013In: Public

    When Tobi continues to act out, his guardians have no choice but to send him to seek help. The result is anything but textbook.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on August 15, 2013 at 8:14 am

    "After burning down his school, a precocious boy must successfully complete an experimental behavior readjustment program or be sent back into the foster system."

    “After burning down his school, a precocious boy must successfully complete an experimental behavior readjustment program or be sent back into the foster system.”

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