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Spoiled rich girl spends to much on her daddy's credit card and is forced to get a job to pay off the debt. While working she falls in love with a coworker who shows her the value of a dollar.
How about this? ----- "After spending to much of Daddy's money, a spoiled girl, is forced by her father to get a job or lose the trust fund she's set to receive on her eighteenth birthday." ----- (Because this is a story about a spoiled girl having to get a real job, I don't believe the logline needRead more
How about this?
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“After spending to much of Daddy’s money, a spoiled girl, is forced by her father to get a job or lose the trust fund she’s set to receive on her eighteenth birthday.”
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(Because this is a story about a spoiled girl having to get a real job, I don’t believe the logline needs the love story angle as well)
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
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As far as loglins go, it's concise and to the point. We see a goal and what's standing (no pun intended) in the leads way. However, I'm not sure it's believable a one legged hockey player could make a comeback. Unless the scripts based on a true story it might be reaching when it comes to suspensionRead more
As far as loglins go, it’s concise and to the point. We see a goal and what’s standing (no pun intended) in the leads way.
However, I’m not sure it’s believable a one legged hockey player could make a comeback. Unless the scripts based on a true story it might be reaching when it comes to suspension of disbelief.
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
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Great feedback +1
Great feedback +1
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