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fugitive is a story about a man who is famed for a murder he didn't commit on his way to prison his bus crashes so he goes on the run to find the true killer to prove his innocents as police are trying to find his whereabouts
"After being framed for murder, a doctor goes on the run to find the killer despite being hunted by a determined lawman."
“After being framed for murder, a doctor goes on the run to find the killer despite being hunted by a determined lawman.”
See lessA former commercial writer will stop at nothing to prove to his friends that he can stand on his own feet again.
Adrian, I like the premise, but two things: One: "Stand on his own two feet" should probably be ramped up a bit. It isn't compelling for a logline. What's his ultimate goal? Write the great American novel? Become the vice president of an advertising company? Win the girl of his dreams? I think addinRead more
Adrian, I like the premise, but two things:
One: “Stand on his own two feet” should probably be ramped up a bit. It isn’t compelling for a logline. What’s his ultimate goal? Write the great American novel? Become the vice president of an advertising company? Win the girl of his dreams? I think adding a little more punch to his goal will help sell the story.
Two: What (or who) is standing in his way? Adding that will help your logline.
I hope that helped, good luck with this!
See lessWhen an ex UN officer turned professional election fixer working to ensure victory for a brutal dictator is scapegoated by his latest client, he uses every dirty trick he knows to try and win power for a little-known rebel group that not only promises freedom for their people – but payback for him.
"When an election fixer is targeted by the dictator he helped come to power, he must use every trick in the book to win power for a little known rebel group if he's to remove the dictator in order to survive."
“When an election fixer is targeted by the dictator he helped come to power, he must use every trick in the book to win power for a little known rebel group if he’s to remove the dictator in order to survive.”
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