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When a spoiled rich law student discovers one of his classmates is a cat burglar, she offers to set him up with his long-time crush in exchange for his silence.
Stolen Hearts
Stolen Hearts
See lessTired of being hated, a clever rat creates a fake bushy tale to blend with the beloved squirrel's, but must keep up the facade or lose the squirrel of his dreams.
I see your point dpg, and since it isn't written yet, I can make changes. The story is; Simon doesn't appreciate what he has. He thinks the grass is greener on the other side. His internal journey begins when he believes life would be better as a squirrel and ends when he realizes he should just beRead more
I see your point dpg, and since it isn’t written yet, I can make changes.
The story is; Simon doesn’t appreciate what he has. He thinks the grass is greener on the other side.
His internal journey begins when he believes life would be better as a squirrel and ends when he realizes he should just be himself.
However, your idea does “Up the ante.” Making life harder for Simon in the beginning of the story would contrast the “Cushy” life of a squirrel.
Great feedback!
See lessTired of being hated, a clever rat creates a fake bushy tale to blend with the beloved squirrel's, but must keep up the facade or lose the squirrel of his dreams.
Hey Tony, I never even thought of Romeo and Juliet, interesting take.
Hey Tony, I never even thought of Romeo and Juliet, interesting take.
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