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  1. Posted: June 12, 2013In: Public

    Tired of being hated, a clever rat creates a fake bushy tale to blend with the beloved squirrel's, but must keep up the facade or lose the squirrel of his dreams.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on June 12, 2013 at 7:49 pm

    Simon the rat has a good life, a couple of true friends and a sweet little bungalow under the stairs. But when he sees how good the Squirrels have it, he gets jealous and creates a fake bushy tail so he can be beloved and given free food at the park. He also sees a beautiful squirrel (Milla) who heRead more

    Simon the rat has a good life, a couple of true friends and a sweet little bungalow under the stairs. But when he sees how good the Squirrels have it, he gets jealous and creates a fake bushy tail so he can be beloved and given free food at the park.

    He also sees a beautiful squirrel (Milla) who he falls for.

    He’s accepted, but Rick, the leader of the squirrels, is in love with Milla and doesn’t like Simon sniffing around. He is suspicious and determined to prove Simon a fraud.

    Rats are the nerds
    Squirrels are the cool kids.

    In many ways it’s an eighties teen comedy, but with rats and squirrels.

    Not written yet but the concept is there. (Thinking about doing this as a youtube project)

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  2. Posted: June 9, 2013In: Public

    -TAKE #2- After being fired for accidentally killing the Hero, a disgraced 'minion of the warlord' is conscripted by the local village to become their champion and face his former evil boss.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on June 12, 2013 at 7:31 pm

    How about this: (An offshoot of what Nick wrote) After accidentally killing a noble hero, a disgraced henchman is forced become the champion of a local village in order to overthrow the tyranny of his former master.?

    How about this: (An offshoot of what Nick wrote)

    After accidentally killing a noble hero, a disgraced henchman is forced become the champion of a local village in order to overthrow the tyranny of his former master.?

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  3. Posted: June 9, 2013In: Public

    -TAKE #2- After being fired for accidentally killing the Hero, a disgraced 'minion of the warlord' is conscripted by the local village to become their champion and face his former evil boss.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on June 12, 2013 at 7:20 pm

    Nicholas, I like what you wrote, (even though your summery isn't quite what the script is about) you seemed to catch the essence. Nice job

    Nicholas, I like what you wrote, (even though your summery isn’t quite what the script is about) you seemed to catch the essence.

    Nice job

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