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  1. Posted: June 10, 2013In: Public

    Buttoned-down 20-something Eric isn?t ready to marry his longtime girlfriend Abby. His only way out is through slacker Sam, his identical twin brother, who offers to pose as Eric to do the dumping. But the plan becomes a disaster when Sam realizes Abby is actually really cool–and falls head over heels for her…

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on June 10, 2013 at 5:48 pm

    Great re-write Elizabeth, I think that says it all. (Of course you meant Eric not Sam)

    Great re-write Elizabeth, I think that says it all.

    (Of course you meant Eric not Sam)

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  2. Posted: June 9, 2013In: Public

    -TAKE #2- After being fired for accidentally killing the Hero, a disgraced 'minion of the warlord' is conscripted by the local village to become their champion and face his former evil boss.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on June 10, 2013 at 4:00 am

    Hey guys thanks for the great comments. This movie takes place in a slightly surreal version of ancient China. There are some comedic elements to it. I may have to find a way to get that across in the logline. Jean-Marie. I agree with your comments, in fact I am not sure where to send it. HollywoodRead more

    Hey guys thanks for the great comments.

    This movie takes place in a slightly surreal version of ancient China. There are some comedic elements to it.

    I may have to find a way to get that across in the logline.

    Jean-Marie. I agree with your comments, in fact I am not sure where to send it. Hollywood doesn’t like all non-white casts and Asia probably wouldn’t the like ‘American’ Sense of humor in the movie.

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  3. Posted: June 9, 2013In: Public

    -TAKE #2- After being fired for accidentally killing the Hero, a disgraced 'minion of the warlord' is conscripted by the local village to become their champion and face his former evil boss.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on June 9, 2013 at 2:55 pm

    It was apparent from the responses, 'Minion' was too vague so I added 'Minion of the Warlord' to be more specific.

    It was apparent from the responses, ‘Minion’ was too vague so I added ‘Minion of the Warlord’ to be more specific.

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