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  1. Posted: June 8, 2013In: Public

    After being fired for accidentally killing the hero, a bumbling minion is conscripted by the local village to defeat the Warlord.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on June 9, 2013 at 8:50 am

    I agree dpg. just saying minion doesn't work. I think if I said 'minion of the Warlord' it would be more specific but then I would be using the word Warlord twice. I am trying to avoid that.

    I agree dpg. just saying minion doesn’t work.

    I think if I said ‘minion of the Warlord’ it would be more specific but then I would be using the word Warlord twice. I am trying to avoid that.

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  2. Posted: June 8, 2013In: Public

    After being fired for accidentally killing the hero, a bumbling minion is conscripted by the local village to defeat the Warlord.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on June 9, 2013 at 4:13 am

    Thanks guys, I think you are getting closer. However I don't think 'foot soldier is quite right In marshal arts films when a "Hero" goes up against "The big bad guy" he first has to face hundreds of minions. They surround him and attack him one at a time. Then they get the butts kicked. This scriptRead more

    Thanks guys, I think you are getting closer.

    However I don’t think ‘foot soldier is quite right

    In marshal arts films when a “Hero” goes up against “The big bad guy” he first has to face hundreds of minions. They surround him and attack him one at a time. Then they get the butts kicked.

    This script is from the point of view of a minion. One of those faceless fighters that stand in rows and shout “Huh!”

    But I think you are right that using the word ‘minion’ is confusing.

    I do like the title, “Accidental Hero” I may keep it in my back pocket

    As for why the village wants the Warlord defeated, it’s because he forces them to pay ‘tribute’ to him for his protection. (of course the only danger the village has is from the Warlord himself)
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    “After being fired for accidentally killing the hero, a bumbling Chinese marshal artist is conscripted by the local village to defeat the Warlord who’s been forcing them to pay tribute.”

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  3. Posted: June 6, 2013In: Public

    Acting in concert, objects start to refuse to be a part of bad actions for no apparent reason

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on June 8, 2013 at 4:13 pm

    Hey Jean, I think what Tony is saying is, you started by being inspired by Eakouri, But Eakouri begins with a lead character and a goal, A postman wants to deliver a letter but can't because the mailbox won't cooperate. That is drama, a lead character with a goal and something (Mailbox) stands in thRead more

    Hey Jean, I think what Tony is saying is, you started by being inspired by Eakouri, But Eakouri begins with a lead character and a goal, A postman wants to deliver a letter but can’t because the mailbox won’t cooperate. That is drama, a lead character with a goal and something (Mailbox) stands in the way.

    So you should start with a specific individual who wants to do something immoral then have the object not cooperate.

    Hope that helped!

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