Have an account? Sign In Now
Lost your password? Please enter your email address. You will receive a link and will create a new password via email.
Please briefly explain why you feel this question should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this answer should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this user should be reported.
After being fired for accidentally killing the hero, a bumbling minion is conscripted by the local village to defeat the Warlord.
Thanks Tony, I was having that trouble while writing it. (And keeping the word count down) 1) Marshall arts film 2) It takes place in ancient China 3) A minion is basically fodder sent to wear down the hero so he will be easy picken's for the Warlord. However if a minion were to defeat the hero, theRead more
Thanks Tony, I was having that trouble while writing it. (And keeping the word count down)
1) Marshall arts film
2) It takes place in ancient China
3) A minion is basically fodder sent to wear down the hero so he will be easy picken’s for the Warlord.
However if a minion were to defeat the hero, the Warlord would lose honor and could be kicked out of the Warlord union. So Tong (The minion) is fired. (Sort of Donald trump style)
4) After he’s fired, Tong’s captured by the village, they tell him “Since you killed our hero now you must face the warlord.
5) He is trained by ‘The Elder’ whose granddaughter (Li Li) was in love with “Chen” the Hero he accidentally killed
6) Part of the story the relationship between Li LI and Tong.
What tong wants: To be good at something (He’s a bit of a failure)
What Tong needs: To believe in himself (The internal journey of the story)
Not sure how to say that in 30 words.
See lessAfter being fired for accidentally killing the hero, a bumbling minion is conscripted by the local village to defeat the Warlord.
This has been written, having trouble with the logline.
This has been written, having trouble with the logline.
See lessOn the run from a determined street enforcer, a young Londoner will do anything and everything to avoid capture but the enforcer has pledged to kill himself in the event of failure.
You have written quite a few loglines, since there's no consensus and the story has been written, go with the one you believe is the best.
You have written quite a few loglines, since there’s no consensus and the story has been written, go with the one you believe is the best.
See less