1. Posted: June 2, 2013In:

    A horrific automobile accident throws two women from different walks of life into a case of mistaken identity. One woman, an Undercover Agent, fights for her life in a coma. The other women mistaken for the Agent discovers this was no accident and must fight the Agent's adversaries to find out why they are wanted dead.

    Richiev Singularity

    Jean-Marie gives two great logline choices. The reason being; in your logline you concentrate on two characters, the woman who is mistaken for the agent and the agent herself. But since the agent is in a coma clearly the woman mistaken for the agent is the lead character. Jean-Marie does a great jobRead more

    Jean-Marie gives two great logline choices.

    The reason being; in your logline you concentrate on two characters, the woman who is mistaken for the agent and the agent herself.

    But since the agent is in a coma clearly the woman mistaken for the agent is the lead character.

    Jean-Marie does a great job concentrating on one character in the logline thus telling the story and keeping the word count down.

    I think this is a great idea for a movie, good luck with this!

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  2. Posted: June 1, 2013In:

    After the sudden death of his wife a man hits rock bottom only to find help from the one that killed her.

    Richiev Singularity

    Great point Jean-Marie, If he wasn't in prison there would always be that constant sense of danger. I agree.

    Great point Jean-Marie, If he wasn’t in prison there would always be that constant sense of danger. I agree.

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  3. Posted: June 1, 2013In:

    Here's just the concept, not an actual logline What if currency never existed ? but instead we had to trade memory's ? Our whole life's are basically memory's, we never live in the present. So what if, in the future, all of society traded in run down memory's, stored in banks. The higher class members of society are ridden with memory's. Then you have the lower class people, left to rot on the street with no memory's what so ever. There is a corrupt government which steals taxes of memory from you every month, and if you run out of memory's, you are taken in to cell 5, also known as shutdown to be 'rehabilitated'. If you want a loaf of bread that would cost you a mere memory of the last 5 minute road trip, new Aston martin ? that could cost you up to a months worth of memory's, even more. Many of you may look at this concept and think ''what a load of shit'' but it's still early days, as i'v only just started developing it. Any constructive criticism will be great !

    Richiev Singularity

    Thanks Tony, I agree about the Total Recall/Blade runner points you made.

    Thanks Tony, I agree about the Total Recall/Blade runner points you made.

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