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  1. Posted: June 1, 2013In: Public

    After the sudden death of his wife a man hits rock bottom only to find help from the one that killed her.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on June 2, 2013 at 11:21 am

    Second attempt: "On a quest for closure, a grieving husband strikes an unlikely friendship with the man who killed his wife when he visits the prison to discover the motive behind the crime."

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    “On a quest for closure, a grieving husband strikes an unlikely friendship with the man who killed his wife when he visits the prison to discover the motive behind the crime.”

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  2. Posted: May 31, 2013In: Public

    In a post apocalyptic future, a lone cybernetic soldier finds his humanity again through a long lost love and sacrifice.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on June 2, 2013 at 10:55 am

    The problem is, after reading this logline I have no idea what the story is about. I have a character and I have a setting but no story. ----- "When the woman he loved as a human is attacked by reavers, a cybernetic solder slowly rediscovers his humanity as he protects her town from those that wantRead more

    The problem is, after reading this logline I have no idea what the story is about. I have a character and I have a setting but no story.
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    “When the woman he loved as a human is attacked by reavers, a cybernetic solder slowly rediscovers his humanity as he protects her town from those that want to claim their clean-water well.”
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    Hope that helped, good luck with this!

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  3. Posted: June 1, 2013In: Public

    A middle aged women raised by her grandparents gets a knock on the door from a man claiming to be her father.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on June 2, 2013 at 10:40 am

    This is the description of a scene not really a logline. The story is what happens after she answers the door. ----- "After a man claiming to be her biological father shows up at her doorstep, a middle aged woman must discover the truth behind the lies of what happened thirty years ago." ----- HopeRead more

    This is the description of a scene not really a logline.

    The story is what happens after she answers the door.
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    “After a man claiming to be her biological father shows up at her doorstep, a middle aged woman must discover the truth behind the lies of what happened thirty years ago.”
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    Hope that helped, good luck with this!

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