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A man is accused by a fortune teller of being guilty of a series of crimes, which have not yet been committed; and what seemed like a bad joke turns into a nightmare when the police arrive looking for him, considering him the main suspect in a murder. Now he must flee to prove his innocence, before another death occurs.
I wish there was an 'edit' button. (Because I am more of a re-writer than a writer) Here is what I probably should have written. “When he's accused by a fortune-teller of a murder he's yet to commit, a mild-mannered accountant must prove his innocence when the murder occurs and he's the prime suspecRead more
I wish there was an ‘edit’ button. (Because I am more of a re-writer than a writer)
Here is what I probably should have written.
“When he’s accused by a fortune-teller of a murder he’s yet to commit, a mild-mannered accountant must prove his innocence when the murder occurs and he’s the prime suspect.”
See lessA team of intrepid explorers develop the first faster than light drive to take humanity to the stars. The only thing in their way is humanity itself.
"The only thing in their way is humanity itself." This line is confusing. 1: If you mean by humanity that the populous is attempting to stop the development of the faster than light drive (thus standing in their way) Then you should put a face to humanity, a single person who is dead set on stoppingRead more
“The only thing in their way is humanity itself.”
This line is confusing.
1: If you mean by humanity that the populous is attempting to stop the development of the faster than light drive (thus standing in their way) Then you should put a face to humanity, a single person who is dead set on stopping the explorers traveling to the stars.
2: If you mean by humanity; that the crew’s petty squabbles and infighting (Their humanity) hinder the mission. Then you should just say that instead. “…But the mission is threatened by their own squabbles and prejudices.”
See lessAfter the death of his twin sister, a struggling teen slips into a fantasy world of denial. Taking on a mythic adventure, the ensuing clash of values with local tyrant businessman, resolves a 40-year-old mystery at the heart of his communities suffering.
In this fantasy world, what form does the tyrant businessman take? Does the antagonist become the king of the fantasy land, an invading warlord, or an evil dragon that must be slain? What does the conflict look like, what are the actions your lead character must take to achieve his goal? "After hisRead more
In this fantasy world, what form does the tyrant businessman take?
Does the antagonist become the king of the fantasy land, an invading warlord, or an evil dragon that must be slain?
What does the conflict look like, what are the actions your lead character must take to achieve his goal?
“After his twin sister dies, a struggling teen slips into a fantasy world where the tyrant businessman who caused his sibling’s death transforms into a firebreathing dragon which he must slay to save the land.”
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