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EBABE confronts danger, finds romance, humor, and financial success during her buying and selling eventures online.
Movies are a visual medium, I am not sure if someone sitting at a computer buying and selling things would necessarily make for a compelling movie. As for the logline, It seems more like a blurb than a logline. What is EBABE's goal and who is standing in her way?
Movies are a visual medium, I am not sure if someone sitting at a computer buying and selling things would necessarily make for a compelling movie.
As for the logline, It seems more like a blurb than a logline. What is EBABE’s goal and who is standing in her way?
See lessA world renown Cambridge Professor, takes on her new job as at a prestigious high school with a bad reputation, while she struggles as a recently single mother of two in Los Angeles.
Your logline is starting to come around. This is a much better attempt. One thing that struck me was "Prestigious high school" vs "a bad reputation" it seems as those two things are opposite. If both those elements are important to your story, I would keep it but if not you might just want to say "aRead more
Your logline is starting to come around. This is a much better attempt.
One thing that struck me was “Prestigious high school” vs “a bad reputation” it seems as those two things are opposite.
If both those elements are important to your story, I would keep it but if not you might just want to say “a high school with a bad reputation” and get rid of the prestigious part.
I like how this is shaping up.
See lessFaced with the prospect of being forced into early retirement, a tough female detective agrees to an undercover operation: To infiltrate the life of a respected London gangster. The case hits a snag when she falls in love with her mark.
faced I mean not face.
faced I mean not face.
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